TemperanceDraws's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fembot Columbia (COMMISSION)]

You know, with all the Columbia art on Hypnohub recently, I knew this would eventually happen. Great job!

SuperTechno324 responds:

i even got this commissioned by the man himself ^^

[Livin' Da Dream]

Truly an exemplary American citizen, big titties and all!

Jokes aside, I really like your art and how much you render your drawings. I remember a YouTube video of yours where you showed that process, and it's mind-blowing how much time you put into rendering your work!

I am a tad bit confused about that midsection, should we really be seeing the top of the bikini if the belly is hanging like that? Normally there'd be some overlay when the stomach extends a bit over the pelvis, right?

Anyway, it's a really good drawing, nonetheless!

BombsAhoy responds:

I imagined her bikini being kind of low-rise or maybe even pulled down a bit. It's mainly just a result of me wanting to draw a girl with a nice belly, but also having her bush be visible, eating- my-cake-and-having-it-too type of stuff. So, the result is something that not may look 100% accurate, but is hopefully well-rendered enough to still look pleasing.

[Harem Minnie Mouse]

Not what I was expecting from you, but still appreciated nonetheless! I really like the silhouette and the gesture you have going on here (but then again, harem dancers are great for practicing movement and gesture, and just really fun to draw!)

[Trapped By Poison Ivy]

This was a very well-done piece, I don't really have any improvement tips, but I have an idea that might(?) enhance it. You could potentially use the pink of the pheromones to guide the viewer's eye to her foot. Since pink and green are opposites on the color wheel, you could use the stark contrast of the colors and some composition work to make a pathway that will guide the viewer directly to the focal point.

Like I said, really good image and nothing wrong that I can see right off the bat, but the colors just gave me an idea for something more.

[Kimberly cosplay]

I find it a tad intriguing how you draw the braids of hair in this drawing. They still have the line overlay indicating that they are braids, but are also straight and don't have the ribbed edges like you'd see on traditional drawings of braids. It might be something I consider in my work soon, as I've been trying to find a convenient way of tackling the issue with braids.

[Diamond Play]

The expressions? Great.
The contrast of the colors blue and yellow and how it makes Blue's hands stand out during the grope? Amazing.
This whole composition is great and it was how I got into your art (aside from the fantastic Peridot stuff done as well)!

[Yellow Diamond]

I really like the way how the curves flow through her body in this piece, as well as the bounce light that can be seen from her butt cheeks (something I know I gotta pay attention to when I draw).

[1022]

The mix between hard, solid black shading and softer, yet still cel-like shading is amazing! I also like that the squiggles are used to represent the light and the textures, something I really have to try if I ever get to this skill level one of these days!

[Cursed Item]

The only thing I would say needs improving is to make the blood flow slower, but that's only one small thing compared to this amazing pixelart that you've provided for us (the pixel shading on this bad boy is top-notch!)

[Solitude at 3AM]

I really like the subtle texture and colors that you use for this one. I didn't notice it in the beginning, but when you zoom in, the outline for the moon (I'm guessing it's a moon since the image implies it's 3 AM) is in red and green, so it doesn't create such a harsh contrast (it almost give it that fuzzy texture like the rest of the image!) For an abstract piece, I feel like I discovered a little treat along the way that made it more impactful, great job on this one, and I can't wait to see what else you got for us.